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>> Saturday, July 10, 2010

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 12; the twelfth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.


Today, I had an Ice Cream,
In your favorite ice cream parlor,
Your favorite flavor,
They also played your favorite music
Taking me back to the days,
Which were favorite to both of us
I just wished that you were with me
I wish you had not left me
Alone in this ruthless world
I still remember
Your body cold
and your smile sweet
Just like the ice cream
I wish I hadn't killed you



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27 Expert Comments:

Deeps!! July 10, 2010 at 12:57 AM  

wow! the end just scared me!!

Gyanban July 10, 2010 at 8:48 AM  

why do you even bother ?

Richa Sharma July 10, 2010 at 11:07 AM  

Gosh.... 14 lines with the power of 400. This is a mindblowing post with an excellent ending.

Great job... Kp Up!!

Dhiman July 10, 2010 at 1:01 PM  

OMG! He killed her! Why?

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky July 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM  

@Deeps!!
Don't get scared. Eat chocolates.

@GB
:)

@Sharma Ji
Thanks

@Dhiman Kaku
It was based on a story my friend had told me some time ago. She was looking so lovely that day. She could not have been more lovely and his. To capture the moment in his memories. He killed her.

Swathi Pradeep July 10, 2010 at 4:08 PM  

Wow!! Scary!! :) ATB

-Swathi Pradeep,
http://swathipradeepworld.wordpress.com/2010/07/10/wish/"

Someone Is Special July 11, 2010 at 5:59 AM  

just 14 lines but scary...

I wish you a good luck for BATOM - 12

Saravana Kumar - Wish

Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M

Shreyas July 11, 2010 at 8:05 AM  

hey Prathamesh...
First time, i am reading ur blog and i am quite impressed by ur writing...
gud things come in small packages.
This article for BAT is awesome...
Even i am contesting for BAT this time,
Have a look at my article here

easyvivek July 11, 2010 at 9:42 AM  

this is out of blue, cool one, i like sudden endings :)
good one, the man was seemingly as ruthless as the world he complaine dof..
best wishes for BAT12..
btw the header pic, its amazing, it reminds me of the raavan from nina paley's sita sings the blues..
amazing movie, u must see it :)

gkam July 11, 2010 at 3:08 PM  

Totally unexpected. Psychotic.

Good Wishes for BAT12!

Gkam - Wish

Amity July 11, 2010 at 3:14 PM  

A delicious ice cream and a crime???

Unique...:-)

Now I would have fear eating ice cream with a guy...lols!!!

All the best!!!

Brijender Singh July 11, 2010 at 4:01 PM  

Cruel ! And suave !
Loved it-reminded me of that poem, "Every man kills the things he loves-the brave man does it with a sword,the coward with a smile".
Brilliant !

Chanz July 11, 2010 at 4:07 PM  

Oops.. what a cruel ending.. and what a cruel post.. :P

Guddu July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM  

U know as i started reading it, i started missing "SOMEONE" but the ending scared me :P

All da best for BATOM

http://frescobyme.blogspot.com/2010/07/wish.html

Lost in thoughts July 12, 2010 at 9:01 AM  

The warning in your blog is apt ;)

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky July 12, 2010 at 12:56 PM  

@Lost is Thoughts

Thanks. After 1 year of my blog, someone at last said it. I am elated to be called a B-Grade writer.

@Guddu
Smile :)

@Chanz

Wicked 3:)

@Brij

Brilliant

@Amity

Enjoy your ice cream

@gkam

It's wicked like your dp :P

@easyvivek

He is not at all ruthless

@Shreyas

Thank You

@Someone is Special

Special Thanks

@Swathi

Scary ATB? I will need to show you how crazy things can be.

swayambhu July 12, 2010 at 2:59 PM  

what an idea sirjee ;-)

Mahesh Kalaal July 12, 2010 at 3:45 PM  

why to remember and bother about the person he killed....
wishful killing or psychotic wish..?
or
a betrayal ?

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky July 12, 2010 at 7:21 PM  

@Mahesh

It was not betrayal. It was a kind of selfish love.

As they say, nobody knows the future. She was his at her best. He wanted to capture the moment and he did that.

Dil se July 12, 2010 at 10:31 PM  

Wow !! Didn't see the end coming!!
All the best.

Ms.Meduri July 13, 2010 at 6:45 PM  

oh ma....its tempting post yaar..!!!

am gonna have an icecream in my fav place for sure today..!!!

Vipul Grover July 14, 2010 at 3:42 PM  

Hathyaare :p
Nice poem and feelings dude :)

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky July 14, 2010 at 10:52 PM  

@ Ms. Meduri

:)

@Vipul

:P

Thank you.

Shilpa Garg July 15, 2010 at 6:55 PM  

OH!! Scary!! :O
And your explanation in the comment is all the more spine-chilling!!
All the best for BAT-12.
Cheers :)

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe July 15, 2010 at 9:02 PM  

:O mamu....excellent boss....shit...cold blood is indeed cold!!!

aativas July 16, 2010 at 12:55 PM  

What a twist!

Haddock July 26, 2010 at 7:19 PM  

What a punch line.

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